tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4159913557801960196.post194689445838094180..comments2023-07-22T12:20:49.730+01:00Comments on Emma Foster CGA&A: @ Phil: Essay First DraftEmma Fosterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10552380993336130316noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4159913557801960196.post-77964731481174769352011-11-21T22:00:13.036+00:002011-11-21T22:00:13.036+00:00Thanks Phil I'll get on it! :)Thanks Phil I'll get on it! :)Emma Fosterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10552380993336130316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4159913557801960196.post-11864904309273836302011-11-21T11:36:39.499+00:002011-11-21T11:36:39.499+00:00Hey Emma,
This is nicely controlled discussion - ...Hey Emma,<br /><br />This is nicely controlled discussion - and I like the final concluding idea that suggests 'style over content'. I actually showed The Dark Crystal last year for Unit 2 for just this reason! However, you've got a number of spelling mistakes throughout (proberly instead on probably, for example), so I want you to go through with a fine-tooth comb and eradicate any errors etc.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com