Character Biography: The Super Intelligent, Wise Owl Robot Sidekick

When it came to thinking up a name for my sidekick I wanted to try and create a clever acronym so I did some research and found out that 'Aves' is a scientific name for 'bird'. I took this to abbreviate with qualities of my sidekick and owls and ended up with astute which means smart, visually enhanced (my sidekick has magnified camera lens eyes) sidekick. Character Biography- The Super Intelligent, Wise Owl Robot Sidekick

Character Biography: The Vainglorious, Self-Important, Ex-Space Operative

Character Biography- The Vainglorious, Self-Important Ex-Space Operative

Character Biography: The Young, Spirited Secret Agent

I created my character biography for my secret agent heroine as I feel this will help me design her better as I should now understand her personality and ways of working more. I decided on a name which had a sense of sci-fi to it and tried to find a surname which would be appropriate for her job position. Character Biography- The Young, Spirited Secret Agent

Character Design: Rough Story Synopsis

This synopsis is still a work in progress as I'm still unsure of how some events would unfold and I have yet to decide on names for the characters so please bare with me! :)

(Insert name here) is an average human being or so it seems. But in fact she specialise sin the secret services loving her job of wrecking havoc on any villainous plan that may be about.
Hired by a secret intergalactic space program, she journeys into space after strange interference on their satellites is picked up detailing the plan of an ex intergalactic space employee to take control of the world for the benefit of his health.

We say ex employee after an unexpected mishap with his ship's airlock took place trapping him in a red taped space zone. This imprisonment has lead to a strange growth on him which is slowly eating away at him alive and which he needs a mineral deep down in the centre of the Earth to resolve it. See this is what happens when you play with serious space tech!

On assignment of this new mission (Hero's name) befriends the intergalactic program's latest state of the art robot appropriately in the form of an owl as he assists her with his wise words and smartness.
(Hero's name) takes on the role of double agent, trying to foil the villain's plan by tricking him into believing she is all about helping his cause.

However, when events suddenly turn on their head putting good and evil in a head to head battle a long forgotten gadget comes back to help save the day.

The Concluding Escapade 'The Development'

The Concluding Escapade 'The Development'

The Concluding Escapade Final Script

Just a few tweaks here and there such as changing of dialogue, taking out the second ship resulting in the clunk then the thud straight after adding more rhythm. Also decided I would like to have the sound of the waves and seagulls playing as the second act finishes. Reminds me of the beach and actually ghosts/ death so would foreshadow what has happened to Thomas.

The Concluding Escapade Final Script

@ Phil: New Act 1

Hi Phil I was just wondering if you could check over my new act 1 for me to see if it fits better with the rest of the story. At one point I did think of having moving boxes filling up the hallway and the photographs on the walls peering through the gaps in these stacks of boxes but then I thought why would my character pack up things when he doesn't want to go and so maybe the throwing away of something linked to a change he doesn't want would show this, especially if there is some cheesy slogan on the leaflet about the place that we know isn't true. Also with regards to my OGR where you said dialogue, would this be subtitles in my animatic? Thanks :)

The Concluding Escapade Script 2.0