Monday, 21 November 2011

@ Phil: Essay First Draft

Hi Phil if you have time could you possibly look over this draft for me to make sure I'm not falling into the same trap of trying to cram too much in like last time doh! Thanks!

Analyse Critically the Production Design and Visual Concepts of the Dark Crystal (1982)


tutorphil said...

Hey Emma,

This is nicely controlled discussion - and I like the final concluding idea that suggests 'style over content'. I actually showed The Dark Crystal last year for Unit 2 for just this reason! However, you've got a number of spelling mistakes throughout (proberly instead on probably, for example), so I want you to go through with a fine-tooth comb and eradicate any errors etc.

Emma Foster said...

Thanks Phil I'll get on it! :)